Initial Screening- Audience Feedback

On December 17th I showed an audience of teenagers all the footage that I have edited together so far for my music video. I asked them to fill out some questions of what they like and enjoy about the video. I also asked them what they think I can improve or what else they would like to see in the finished music video.
 

From this I have found that our audience would like a moving background in the performance shots. Also some of the clips are too long and the narrative came across more like a mother and daughter instead of an older and younger sister like we planned.